An artist is pretentious because of how she spells her stage name??? And she sounds like a teacher talking to first grade students because she’s sincere in how she interacts with her audience?? Are you kidding me? You sound like a first grader yourself, resorting to petty and baseless personal attacks against an artist and calling it a ‘review’.

This isn’t a review. It’s a hatchet job. And what’s worse, you don’t even make an effort to veil your obvious contempt for this musician as a person, which just makes you come off sounding completely unprofessional. I hope this isn’t your day job. If so, that’s too bad. Because you could be a lot better.